30-PAGE PERFORMANCE CHECK:

Summary:
Think of this as running a diagnostic on your story’s opening pages. Just like engineers test a machine’s startup performance, this service evaluates the first 30 pages of your manuscript—the moment that determines whether a reader keeps going or not.

For writers who:
Want to know if their opening pages are pulling readers in and holding attention. Perfect for those just starting their first draft, preparing to revise, query, or publish and who want insight into clarity, flow, pacing, and reader engagement.

What you get:
• In-line comments on the first 30 pages (to the nearest scene break).
• A comprehensive editorial letter outlining what’s working, what’s not, and next steps.
• A 1-hour Zoom call to discuss feedback and revision plans.

Outcome:
Walk away with an actionable roadmap to strengthen your story’s opening and a better understanding of how readers experience your first pages.

Price: $300 AUD

Are you interested?

Book a free 30-minute discovery call.