BIG PICTURE AUDIT:

Summary:
This is your story’s aerial scan—a high-level audit of your manuscript’s major systems: structure, pacing, character arcs, and worldbuilding. We zoom out to assess what’s working, where the red-light issues lie, and how to strategically revise.
For writers who:
Have a complete draft and are ready to tackle revisions but need clarity on what’s working, and what’s not.

What you get:
• In-line comments on the first 20 pages to assess your scene-level writing and reader engagement.
• A comprehensive editorial letter (on the global story and scene level) outlining what’s working, what’s not, and next steps.
• A 1-hour Zoom call to discuss feedback and revision plans.

Outcome:
You’ll gain deep insight into your manuscript’s big picture, along with clear, professional guidance to help you revise with purpose and confidence.

Pricing Tiers:
Base Tier: Up to 80,000 words — $1850 AUD.
Expanded Tier: Between 80,001-100,000 words — $2300 AUD.
Epic Tier: 100,001+ words — $1000 AUD.

*For 100k+ word manuscripts, I offer an outline assessment instead of a full manuscript read. This allows us to step back, assess the story’s big-picture elements, and build a clear revision roadmap.

Are you interested?

Book a free 30-minute discovery call.