
BIG PICTURE AUDIT
Summary:
This is your story’s aerial scan—a high-level audit of your manuscript’s major systems: structure, pacing, character arcs, and worldbuilding. We zoom out to assess what’s working, where the red-light issues lie, and how to strategically revise.
For writers who:
Have a complete draft and are ready to tackle revisions but need clarity on what’s working, and what’s not.
What you get:
• In-line comments on the first 20 pages to assess your scene-level writing and reader engagement.
• A comprehensive editorial letter (on the global story and scene level) outlining what’s working, what’s not, and prioritised next steps.
• A 1-hour Zoom call to discuss feedback and revision plans.
Outcome:
You’ll gain deep insight into your manuscript’s big picture, along with clear, professional guidance to help you revise with purpose and confidence.
Pricing Tiers:
Base Tier: Up to 80,000 words → $1850 AUD.
Expanded Tier: Between 80,001-100,000 words → $2300 AUD.
Interested in working with me?
Book a free 30-minute discovery call and tell me more about your story.